Momo Valentine has submitted a number of very powerful and emotional lyrics on the forum to date.  This song was no exception.  While I don't take issue with her writing style (which I rather like) I advised her that sometimes its important to get "out of your [ ... ]

This week Nikki submitted her first song, "I Need You".  Although the writing was good, I saw some common mistakes that I often see people make when they write lyrics.  These are things that everyone should keep in mind - even the more experienced.  The o [ ... ]

This week, Hallaman on the Memorial Beach forums submitted a really good song called "Lunar Me, Lunar You".  I decided to have a look at the song to see if there were any points that could be improved upon.  The original forum post and comments can be found he [ ... ]